My teacher uploaded this feedback for me to see so i can improve my work even more then before.
(bellow is what my teacher uploaded)
Frankie, your blog is very promising. You have a good blog count of 50 posts and there is lots of good evidence to suggest that you are working well on your coursework. However, as you have moved into the production phase, your posting of work has been more sporadic with less evidence of the work that I have seen your group complete in class. Although you are just into level 3, I feel that you have the potential to be attaining a higher mark for this part of the coursework. Please can you read through the feedback below and then complete the to do / targets at the bottom of the page:
strengths:
- some nice evidence of planning
- some nice social media
- some nice use of ICT to present work
- nice branding of the site
weaknesses:
- very little evidence of filming
- no evidence of editing
- time management and frequency of posting during the production phase
- no storyboard
to do / targets:
- upload storyboard asap
- post evidence of your editing and drafts of your title sequence as it develops
- improve frequency of posting as we move into the final editing stages - aim for at least 4 times weekly
-continue to develop your nice use of ICT and social media to present work and address branding / distribution ideas
I am going to use this feedback to further improve my blog.
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