health check 2

My teacher uploaded this for me to see my strengths and weaknesses within my blog posts.

(bellow is what my teacher posted)

Frankie, you are producing some good work for your research and planning blog with 36 posts indicating that you are mostly up to date with the checklist and pitch tasks. However, I still feel that this mark doesn't reflect your true potential or all the hard work I see in class so please read through the feedback below and complete targets at the bottom of the page:

strengths:
- some evidence of R&P
- some detail in posts
- time management mostly good (some gaps though!)
- nicely presented and easy to navigate

weaknesses:
- ICT - reliance on text rather than a greater range of visual apps to present
- key planning tasks missing (see below)
- detail is inconsistent - some posts are very detailed and others more basic

to do / targets:
1. complete missing key planning tasks 26/28/34/36/39 (can be group posts)
2. be more creative with your use of ICT to present your work and use a greater range of visual aids
3. provide more detail in each blog posts either in what you say or in how you present it with ICT - give the context (why are you doing this post - what do you hope to find out?) and provide some evaluation (what have you learned, is it useful, how does it help develop your title sequence and planning for it etc...) Detail can also be shown in how the learning is presented using ICT rather than the amount of text you write.

I used this feedback to see what my weaknesses are so i could focus on them more instead of my strengths, this feedback was very beneficial.