Karen, you are working with lots of promise in this unit and have produced some very good posts. Your current blog post count of 39 indicates that you are mostly up to date with research and planning tasks and there are some nice independent 'off list' posts too. However, the mark currently awarded doesn't reflect all the hard work I see you complete in class and this is mostly due to your blog being quite inconsistent. Please can you read through the feedback below and complete the targets to continue to increase your mark in this part of the coursework.
strengths:
- some evidence of some good research and planning
- some detail in some of your posts
- some care and consideration in the presentation of your ideas
weaknesses:
- research is stronger than planning
- key planning posts are missing (see below)
- detail is inconsistent (some posts very detailed and others more minimal)
- ICT - reliance on text and screen shots to present work rather than range of ICT apps
to do / targets:
1. complete key planning tasks 25/27/28/33/34/36/39 (can be group posts)
2. be more creative with your use of ICT, when you use it, it is very good!
3. aim to be consistent in the detail seen in your posts. - give the context (why are you doing this post - what do you hope to find out?) and provide some evaluation (what have you learned, is it useful, how does it help develop your title sequence and planning for it etc...) Detail can also be shown in how the learning is presented using ICT rather than the amount of text you write.
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